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Patricia Pierce-garciaSchaack's avatar

Hi,

I love the Vince Lombardi quote.

Shalom shalom

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joylene's avatar

What's that old saying? Birds of a feather flock together. So much of what you post about resonates with me. Happy IWSG Day, Lee.

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I read your post, so yes fellow sparrow...we do belong to an interesting flock! I always love your posts with the beautiful images of those beaches. Keep 'em coming.

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

YEAH YOU DID.

...Sorry, just slipped outta me. If this is going where I think it's going, then I'm glad she did.

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Sonia Dogra's avatar

Oh God, so he's dead? Will wait for it to unfold next week.

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Beth Camp's avatar

What an unexpected twist to your story! I loved it and will be back next Wednesday, although am I being too optimistic to hope for a reasonably happy outcome for Mel? Re IWSG's question this month, I don't really go back very often to reread my stories. For example, I've written 4 historical novels, but I'm deep in writing art crime mysteries. Those other stories took a lot of work but I'd rather be in Egypt, writing about stolen artifacts!

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Sandra Cox's avatar

I'd love it:)

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Yvonne V's avatar

I have a hard time re-reading my work, too.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Oh dear. This doesn't bode well. Urp!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I tried to write something for Valentine’s Day. It turned out a bit warped. Thanks for dropping by.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Sounds perfect for Valentine’s Day! Well, in a warped kinda way. Hee! Enjoy your day.

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Renee Kyle's avatar

Amazing scene. Waiting for more

Haven't published yet. I'll let you know when it happens.

In the mean time I'll

Keep on Writing

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

It's an interesting experience each time. My best of luck to you.

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Alex J. Cavanaugh's avatar

I prefer not to re-read any of my published books. I'd rather not know.

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Victoria Marie Lees's avatar

Now you see, Lee, I need to let go of my stories as well. Send them out. Hope for the best. Not fret about them. Good story here! Stay strong, dear IWSG friend.

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Toi Thomas's avatar

Thanks for stopping by my blog and sorry for the late reply.

I know I should comment more, but I want you to know that I've been enjoying your short stories. This one is intense. I look forward to more.

I can relate to your IWSG answer.

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MP Bottega's avatar

Look forward to reading the next part, C Lee. I was right there in that kitchen with white mugs filled with coffee.

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Olga Godim's avatar

Oh-oh. That story definitely needs a conclusion. I need the next Wednesday to come quickly.

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Lisa Buie-Collard's avatar

Okay, now I don’t want to wait till next Wednesday!

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roland yeomans's avatar

All my works needs redoing, but I think I should just write new novels!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

I love your stuff, Roland. If you could clone me, you’d have a bigger fan club. :-)

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