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Sue Goldberg's avatar

Ack.

I saw that I had this to 'look forward to' a couple of days ago but time was not on my side.

I have now devoured it and my flesh is crawling.

Well done. As always.

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Sonia Dogra's avatar

Somehow I saw this coming but then the twist at the Police HQ. Will wait to see how you wind that up.

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Jeff's avatar

Nice twist at the end, and also working in the fire. What do police do when on one case and then a calamity intervenes. There is a good book on the fire department in Virginia City, Nevada, which had its own major fire four years after the Chicago fire. Thanks for the story.

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Natalie Aguirre's avatar

I enjoy stories that make situations worse for my characters too. Great twist to this story.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Yikes! You...I... geeeeeeeeeez! Please tell me that's not the end. Can't leave me hanging like this!

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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

One more episode to go. I will not leave you hanging! :-)

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Phew! I must’ve misunderstood. That Mrs. Kent… whacko fer shure.

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